Improve wording in documentation and ChangeLog

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Manuel Pégourié-Gonnard 2018-12-12 10:23:57 +01:00
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@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ Security
Features
* Add new config.h flag MBEDTLS_CHECK_PARAMS that enables validation of
more of the parameters by public API functions (see its documentation for
details). Disabled by default - requires users to provide an
more of the parameters by public API functions (see its documentation in
config.h for details). Disabled by default - requires users to provide an
implementation of the callback function or macro.
New deprecations

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@ -259,11 +259,11 @@
/**
* \def MBEDTLS_CHECK_PARAMS
*
* This configuration controls whether the library validates more of the
* parameters passed to it.
* This configuration option controls whether the library validates more of
* the parameters passed to it.
*
* When this flag is not defined, the library only attempts to validate input
* parameter if: (1) they may come from the outside world (such as the
* When this flag is not defined, the library only attempts to validate an
* input parameter if: (1) they may come from the outside world (such as the
* network, the filesystem, etc.) or (2) not validating them could result in
* internal memory errors such as overflowing a buffer controlled by the
* library. On the other hand, it doesn't attempt to validate parameters whose
@ -273,7 +273,7 @@
* parameters that are fully controlled by the application, and should always
* be valid if the application code is fully correct and trusted.
*
* For example, when a function accepts a input a pointer to a buffer than may
* For example, when a function accepts as input a pointer to a buffer that may
* contain untrusted data, and its documentation mentions that this pointer
* must not be NULL:
* - the pointer is checked to be non-NULL only if this option is enabled
@ -291,7 +291,7 @@
* your application (see platform_util.h for its prototype) as the library
* calls that function, but does not provide a default definition for it,
* - or provide a different definition of the macro MBEDTLS_PARAM_FAILED()
* below if the above mechanism is not enough flexible to suit your needs.
* below if the above mechanism is not flexible enough to suit your needs.
*
* Uncomment to enable validation of application-controlled parameters.
*/
@ -3052,7 +3052,8 @@
* function mbedtls_param_failed()) and it is your responsibility
* to make sure this macro expands to something suitable (in
* particular, that all the necessary declarations are visible
* from within the library).
* from within the library - you can ensure that by providing
* them in this file next to the macro definition).
*
* \param cond The expression that should evaluate to true, but doesn't.
*/

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@ -185,10 +185,10 @@ typedef enum
* expected failure. If MBEDTLS_CHECK_PARAMS is not enabled, no test
* can be made.
*
* This macro is intended to test that function that return void
* This macro is intended to test that functions returning void
* accept all of the parameter values they're supposed to accept - eg
* that they don't call MBEDTLS_PARAM_FAILED() when a parameter
* that's allowed to be NULL happends to be NULL.
* that's allowed to be NULL happens to be NULL.
*
* Note: for functions that return something other that void,
* checking that they accept all the parameters they're supposed to